My response to prompt #93 by Deb Scott- Deb wanted us to wallow in the depths of our fantasy and make poetry out of the experience. Though she wanted us to begin with free-writing, I must admit, I cheated and went directly to the poem bit. This wasn't the first idea I got, but the only one that clicked.
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23rd September, '09
The death of a pop star
just limelight gone sour;
Or so I thought,
underneath
sheets so blue,
while the media raged
and the fans engaged
in
a semi-fantastical
boohoo.
I slept a normal
sleepy night
dreamt my dreams,
one or two,
and woke up
fresh-faced
and non-teary-eyed
to take
on the world
anew.
I walked the walk and
talked
the talk
since I had not much else to do
there was a vacuum
in the air
everywhere
from all the handkerchiefs blown into.
I resolved
to make not much of it
to try and keep it
an impersonal issue
but little did I know
and little did I think
that 'Billie Jean'
wouldn't
so easily
say adieu.
Sunset came
with a lolling gait
and a face
less orange than blue
it seems
he happened to know the guy
and really cared for him too.
I sheltered under
the indifferent lamp
whose light was never new.
He cared not who stood
he cared not who fell
so today
he shone
with no less ado.
Feet stretched out
my cat
cuddled by my side
my warm
dependable rescue,
I held on to his tail
hoping to float
if the oceans of tears
anymore grew.
I knew when he smiled
his Cheshire cat smile
flicking his pink tongue,
that he was going to
mew;
the sweetest,
lovable-est sound in the world,
and I hugged him tight,
as if on cue.
But Lord of Sanity,
what do I get
but a pop star's voice,
and the
jerking
sliding
dance moves too,
and a steely lecture
for all my disdain
and a few words about his own virtue.
I feel down on my knees,
and cried
and cried
I finally gave the pop star
his due.
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Please do let me know what you think of my attempt at telling tall tales. All comments on the idea and form are very welcome. Thank you.
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Great tale..
ReplyDeletetale of two toes
Hi Amulya,
ReplyDeleteThis was fun and I enjoyed the continuing rhyme.
This was an interesting idea for your poem...and I loved the rhyming..the second stanza was my favorite. ( I could not understand all the hullabaloo over Jackson's death...)
ReplyDeleteI liked the turn in this, how the narrator comes to feel for the celebrity's death through the much more direct connection (though indirect to the rock star) of seeing someone else's mourning. Insightful.
ReplyDeleteI like the narrative here and the end with the cat is really clever.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your poem and I liked the way you were able to change your thinking by sharing sympathies with another. The imagery you used is very vivid. Thank you for your insights, Amulya.
ReplyDeleteThank you all for leaving behind your thoughts on the poem. It's a great push to do more :)
ReplyDeleteNice work - I liked the push/pull that occurred here and the shifts that took place.
ReplyDeleteI held on to his tail
ReplyDeletehoping to float
if the oceans of tears
anymore grew.
A lovely phrase, hoping to float. And we are connected even when we think we're not. Floating, yes, that's very nice. Thanks for writing.
Your poem is so inventive. I love the intermix of pop references (and the narrator's not wanting to be pulled in) and the homey lovely cat. (I am a cat fan, so ...!) Brings a new way of thinking about celebrity, which is a great thing.
ReplyDeleteThanks for playing along!
I read the poem as stating that the cat starts singing like the rock star? If so, it's a great twist on the nine-lives of cats! He's one cool cat.
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Agreed with Therese -- that was an interesting twist at the end with the cat. I have to admit, I was one of the guilty, being sad when MJ passed...but I understand what you're saying here. I enjoyed the read.
ReplyDelete-Nicole
what a kewl kat.....thanks for sharing
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ReplyDelete@Therese and Nicole- Thank you. I now what you mean, Nicole. To tell you the truth I was sad too but just the way the whole episode was blown out of proportion was quite horrible, I felt.
ReplyDelete@Wayne- Thanks. Yup, my cat's a really cool guy :)
@Tumblewords and Deb- Thanks. Yeah, sometimes when media blows things out of proportion, one is left wondering if one's sensibilities are alright or just malfunctional.
@bearlyaudible- Thank you. What did you mean by we are connected even when we think we are not?